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Post by Genocide X on Mar 21, 2006 21:33:18 GMT -5
I jus took over X thanks to Mysery, and posted a rp.
not my best have to get the ring rust off, but wondering what people thought.
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Oddball
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Skitzo? WHO SAID THAT?!
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Post by Oddball on Mar 22, 2006 11:00:18 GMT -5
I really liked the metaphor you used to explain becoming a new man... the whole coming up from a grave - that was some pretty deep shit.
I think that if you wanted to improve, you should probably try to make your character a little more errie/disturbing on the mic... the scenes and shit are fine, they go with what I think X is like... but I'm not feeling you on the mic. I imagined X to be a maniac on the mic, telling his opponents how he is going to murder them and dispose of the body... but eh, that's just me.
Nice drop. Look forward to seeing more of your stuff.
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